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    [Demande D'avis] Composition Anglaise (Accoustic / Rock)

Message  { par Saroma74

Salut à tous,

Voila ma toute première composition Anglaise, dans un style accoustic / rock. J'aurai donc souhaité avoir votre avis sur les lyrics. Je ne suis pas du tout chanteur, je compose pour un petit groupe d'amis.

Lien de l'instrumental : http://www.deezer.com/fr/search/accoustic%20karaoke (Cliquer sur "Born This Way Accoustic Version").

Merci d'avance pour vos avis.

Voici les lyrics. (Le lead vocale est pour une femme).

I've never been like this
I've never felt like this
I was shaking and my heart was racing

The touch of your lips
When you gave me a kiss
That moment was breath taking

And then you took my hand
When both you and i were leaving
And then you showed me a land
where people in love were living (ou dreaming, j'hésite)

****** REFRAIN *******

So i started to closes my eyes
And i missed out all the lies
It's amazing when you're in love
how much time does fly
I've never been like this
I've never felt like this
I never knew (ou experienced) this feeling before
I've long waited for this
I cried waiting for this
And now i'm asking for more

_______________________________

We walked all the beaches
And we crossed all the bridges
been to places i've never seen before

We made love under the stars
You took me in your arms
And i fell asleep full of hopes

In the morning , you left me without a word
I saw your shadow disapear
It was the end of my world
I couldn't stop the tears

***** REFRAIN ******

So i started to open my eyes
And i realised all the lies
It's amazing how much you learn
In the sorrows and the cries
I'm done waiting for this
I'm tired waiting for this
I need to start living again
I can't go on like this
I won't go on like this
I need to stop the pain

So i started to closes my eyes
I missed out all the lies
It's amazing when you're in love
How much time does fly
I've never been like this
I've never felt like this
I never knew this feeling before
I've long waited for this
I cried waiting for this
And now i'm asking for more

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