J'aime bcp le dernier lien, la partie orchestrale est bien faite.
Mais je trouve que les choeurs prennent un peu trop de place dans le mix et il y a trop de basses dans le mixage total.
Mais en soi c'est plutôt cool - Compositeur .org - Forum des Compositeurs : Musique et Composition
En effet je pense que ça donnera mieux si tu chantes toi. Sur la première partie Requiem s'en sort très bien mais dès que les paroles arrivent on entend les limitations du tout virtuel... surtout pour un instrument, la voix, qu'on a tellement l'habitude d'entendre! L'orchestre ça m'a l'air vraiment bien pour du virtuel. - Compositeur .org - Forum des Compositeurs : Musique et Composition
Try a shorter breakdown. There's too much time flashing around while nothing really happens.
And the other thing I've noticed is that the track has no climax at all. After 1:10 (where the peak of the song should start to rage with energy), we are not getting anywhere at all, seems like the flow is stuck. You need to get to the dramatic peak faster and with a lot of energy right after the breakdown. 15 seconds is fairly enough for the breakdown. Manage to get the action from 0:55 to 1:26 to be done in 0:55 to 1:10, and then blow it up, set it to fire with gasoline! You'll have to leave some elements out of course, but you can work it out.
Agree with the comment above. It doesn't seem to have much direction. It needs more energy, drama and climaxes. Also, in the middle I found it hard to hear/feel the rhythm as the synth and percussion parts seemed to be kind of fighting each other. Last but not least, I'm not really sure what it's supposed to be...what are you going for here? I would try to be clearer in your arrangement and structure.
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